potential
The characters were good, but it was still nothing, because there was no story; Get a story!
You really should get a preloader as well, just download the one from Newgrounds.
And another thing..... o yeah a background or something alike should really make things look better.
potential
good graphics (i liked the character), good sound, but the story has to be beter, go on with the coffee for example.
What the ****
good, movie, good graphics, but what was that song?!?!, it was about war and you put a dutch (c)rap song in it about girls and money???? That ruined it all
Wow, what to say now?
this is awesome, i think the best flash i ever seen, ok there wasn't a lot of action, but everything moved just right: We want more! and some longer and some of the texts a little slower, not too slow, because than it gets boring.
Good graphics
Technically, it was great. It was just that the story was bad, and then i mean real bad.
It might be hard to get the story if your Pluto-head is below the average dog or human brain and can't see the leitmotif/governing idea.
10 for the message!
Great movie, not because of the skills, but more because of the message and the way you brought it.
Wauw
Great movie, great style, it reminds me of that famous smoking is badfor you movie. make it some longer! (we want more we want more we want more!)
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